All blacks vs Aussie

All black vs Aussie

I think the the All black will waste Australia. I wish them the best for this weekends game and hope you take the world cup. I reckon that my star play for the game is Ben smith. GO BEN SMITH!! I also think that the All black will get a total score of 52 to 34 for the wallabies. GO THE ALL BLACKS

Ripper rugby

Rippa rugby

Walt: write about rippa 

This is a ohto of the game that we played and it is called Rippa rugby. This is a fun and exciting game to play especially for the little kids. I really enjoyed this game and can't wait for next wednesday. 

Art - Starch art

Art - Starch art

Walt: starch art

This is a screenshot of my starch art. At first it was so gooey, but fun using our fingers. I really felt like a five year old I hope to do it again.

Basic facts results

Basic facts results

Walt: write a reflection on my basic facts results

As you can see, this is a screenshot of my basic facts results. I got 672 as my results, which means I did better than my old score. I am pretty proud of myself because the last time I was given my basic facts, I did not know my LCM and HCF. But now I know my LCM and HCF. The only thing that I didn’t improve on was prime numbers. It’s okay because I still get to practice even more. My next learning step is learning how to divide big numbers.

Art - Black piranha

Art - Black piranha

WALT - Black piranha

This is a screenshot of my art on the black piranha. Before we did this art of the piranha we had to write about it like where they live or what do they eat. So It was really fun doing the black piranha for art and I enjoyed it.

Maths - Basic facts

Maths - Basic facts

WALT : Basic Facts

This is a screenshot of my basic facts that I did in maths. As you can see I have only got one wrong but that is okay because I will still keep trying until I get it right.

Thank you Mrs Parks

Room 11

Glen Innes school

25 September 2015

Dear Mrs Parks

I would like to say thank you for your help in my writing. At first I was struggling and my grade level was low, so I wasn’t pleased. But thanks to your help. I have improved heaps in my writing.

The video clips bought the most joy to me. It was so cool watching the video and it really blew my mind. The videos were so inspiring like the black piranha.  The videos are also easy to describe too. We also did art based on the black piranha video.

I understand the diamante poem that we did. The thing that was hard to do was thinking of words that describe the thing or person and to make it easier for me, my teacher said we had to do it on the black piranha. So, the diamante poem was easy and that was the one I understood.

Another thing with me is editing. Sometimes, when I have finished writing a story, I just don’t check it which is a problem. Usually I don’t edit it because I haven't finished my work so I use my editing time to finish it off. But now, I have to write faster so I have time to edit and then I won’t have any trouble.

Now that I understand how to write my stories properly, I can also edit my work. I would like to say thank you again for your help in my writing.

Yours sincerely

Lana